Tamara Belleza

[tamaraa]

THE PLAYER

What can we call you OOC: Tamara
Anyway to contact you: Uh.. Email?
Your real age: 17
Have you role-played before: yes...2
Where did you hear about us: Friend

THE CHARACTER

Book Character, or Original: Can I be a Transfer Student? PLEASE... I’m very good at role play... Her name is Tamara

Full Name: Tamara Mallory Belleza

Nicknames: N/A

Age: 17 December 27/ 1989

Year: 7th year

Pets (if any): A black cat named “Aphrodite”

House: Slytherin
Gryffindor
Ravenclaw
Hufflepuff

Blood Lines: Pureblood, Tamara’s mother (Mallory Belleza) was a Pureblood girl who went to Beauxbatons, Her mother, was a very beautiful woman, who found normal pure blood wizards boring and pathetic at times, she needed a Mature and Handsome man… she wanted the perfect man, tall, dark and handsome… that’s exactly what she found. Дэвид Шторм... Which meant David Storm, was from Durmstrang and exactly what Mallory wanted and needed, and as a plus, he was extremely pureblood... Exactly like her.

Background: Tamara grew up with both her parents in Paris, France but they have a house in London, England… Tamara never went to pre-school, or elementary school before going to Hogwarts, but she did go to Beauxbatons up to 6th year, until her father decided that he wanted her to go to Hogwarts, after a long fight between her parents they agreed that she should go to Hogwarts. Although she protested, neither parent could be persuaded to let her stay at Beauxbatons.

Tamara’s Powers started early when she was 4 she set the cat on fire, and her parents knew ever since she was going to be a great Witch, little did they know that is would get her into a lot of trouble. Tamara being a Temperamental girl, couldn’t hold back her anger, and tended to use her magic without knowing it, which when she was 10, Tamara accidentally used magic in front of muggles, her parents were forced to pay a fine (since they have money, it wasn’t much) and the muggles where obliviated.

Personality: Tamara is a Temperamental girl, and this normally happens when something happens that she did not want, or when she doesn’t get her way… When she was little she used to un-intentionally use magic, but now at 17 she can control her magic. Tamara is a very nice girl, unless you get on her nerves, then you might want to watch out. Being a beautiful girl Tamara is extremely full of herself, and considers ugly people, a waste of perfectly good air.

If you are the lucky few who become friends with Tamara, then you will soon learn that despite being a slytherin, she is very loyal to her friends… and ONLY her friends. Tamara also respects Teachers –pure or otherwise- but prefers to have pureblood teachers.

Appearance: Tamara is a Extremely beautiful girl, with the body of a goddess, which makes boys and men swoon and girls hate. Tamara has Dark blue eyes, that penetrate the soul, and long black hair, that is naturally wavy, but she sometimes wears is straight. She has perfect naturally tanned skin and is toned everywhere, from quidditch, which she only plays to work out.

What makes your character different: what’s different about Tamara? Well she has the special ability to make you feel like you are the biggest person in the world by making you feel GREAT, but then she also has a way of making people feel small, insignificant, and worthless, which she uses against people in arguments.

What does your character thinks about Dumbledore: Tamara being a Transfer hasn’t really gotten to understand Dumbledore, or get to know him. But in the 2 or 3 times they have met, Tamara decided she likes the old man, he’s nice, funny and has the *old man* cuteness to him. Tamara looks away when people insult him, after giving them a dirty look, and rolls her eyes when people say he’s a crack pot old fool. Although her parents think he’s *off his rocker* Tamara likes him.


Sixth Years and up: DADA
Advanced Potions
Muggle studies (against her will)
DADA
Ancient Ruins
Astronomy
Transfiguration
Charms
Athermancy



Special Requests: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.!!. I know you don’t really want Transfer students... But I beg of you.. Please let me...  (email me at [e-mail] if I’m not allowed!)

Sample:

The world seemed to be reverberating with the loud thumping of something within her. Tamara gulped. She was in line, for the sorting ceremony.

Her biggest fear, was that she wouldn't be sorted into Slytherin. Silly really. Supposing she became a Gryffindor or Ravenclaw? Personally, she didn't think either was acceptable. But then it was her versus family. Expectation was a real pain in the neck.

She flexed his fingers nervously, It wouldn't be long now. she looked around, searching for the source of the noise clouding her mind and freezing her limbs. Then it hit her, it was her own heart! Then her green eyes cleared, shining brightly. It was absurd, she, daughter of the two greatest wizards in her life, was feeling scared of getting sorted! Then a laugh burst out of her, calm and merry.

'It's going to be alright.' was her thought, lightening the leaden weight on her heart. she smiled slightly, happy that she was relieved. The hat went on and off, again and again, sorting the students quickly here and there. And then:
"Bexella, Tamara" was shouted, by a tall, woman in black witch robes. Her stomach plunged once more....

'This is it.' she thought, as her tall slim form, padded across the marble surface of the hall, in the silence that had reigned since the last student was sorted. Her heart in her throat, she sat on the stool, removing the hat from its place.....and putting it on her own head.
'Slytherin....Please, Slytherin....' were her last thoughts, before the wide, black expanse of the hat, eclipsed the light of the Great Hall.



I am not an amazing chocolater

[Yoshimar]

Hello I'm Itzel, I'm the Head Admin and will be reviewing your application.

I'm very tempted you made her last name Belleza on purpose which is really stupid. belleza means beauty in Spanish, I'm a native Spanish speaker and I was laughing hystericaly at this. Then I read your application and shook my head since you probably did do it on purpose.

I don't accept transfer students and I'm rather picky about purebloods unless your application blows me away...

Your application didn't blow me away.

You don't need to capitalize letters after commas, or put in odd characters to feel smart.

What's the difference between pureblooded and EXTREMELY pureblooded? Is it purebloodeds that do extreme sports? Honestly.

There has to be something more than her transfer. What about her childhood? Brothers, sisters? Relations? Friends? Relations with parents? Think of everything that has happened in your life up to before you turned eleven it's probably a lot of stuff.

Also all wizards and witches use magic if they're not trained. So it shouldn't be surprising.

If your character is as pureblooded as you claim her to be (because she's a EXTREME pureblooded!) why the hell would she come in contact with muggles?

Your personality tells me nothing except she's a cardboard character. No reason for her to be in Slytherin other than she's a pretty brat. By the way don't tell what other characters should think about yours, that's a way of power playing.

Also the Slytherin house most people are a bit against women. So I doubt that they'll have a girl on the team unless she does something amazing. Besides there's not much work out you can get from flying in a broom.

Your character is a Sue, pretty and nice and spice!

GAH! Read the bloody plot line! Dumbledore is a wanted criminal for now! So most students are to believe what the newspaper says!

Also if she's a transfer why would her family think about or know about the houses since her parents are also from another school?

And...

Bexella, Tamara
Thought she was supposed to be Belleza.